Hi guys, this is my Easstle Story. It was Halloween when I made this story, so I made it kinda creepy. Here it is, I hope you like it!
It was Halloween, at midnight and it was dark and stormy. There was thunder and lightning, and that’s when I saw it, the creature, he was wearing a black cloak, and that’s all I could remember of him. There was a flash of lightning and I saw him through my bedroom window. It was like that time in the movie Jurassic World where the dinosaur opens up the door and creeps into the girl’s room. Well, this was different, instead of opening the door he teleported into my room. But this was impossible! How could he have teleported? Who was he? There was a flash of lightning and he was gone. I’ve never seen him since.
A year had passed since I last saw the creature, exactly a year. It was Halloween again. I was outside bringing in the bins watching everyone trick or treating. They were lucky, my parents didn’t believe in Halloween. As I pulled in the bins I looked up at the hot and humid sky, I sweating so much that I felt as though I would faint. Then suddenly out of the blue, there was a flash of lightning. What was happening? Why was there thunder coming from the sky when it was a hot humid day? The lightning struck and headed for the bins. I jumped in fright and let go of the bins. He was back. Imagine that things start to mysteriously disappear… One thing disappears, then another thing has gone, and another… Well, that’s what was happening to me. Kids where disappearing leaving the lollies on the side of the road. Houses were even disappearing! I ran inside to the lounge room where my mum and dad were, sitting watching tv. As I sprinted in I just caught my mum and dad disappear into thin air.
“Mum! Dad!” I yelled. I could help them. I ran over to them, but it was too late, they were gone. I fell onto my knees and started to cry. What was I going to do? They were gone, my only family, all gone, I had nothing left. I lay on the couch waiting to disappear, but nothing happened. Then I fell into mud, the house had disappeared. The whole street was empty, nothing was left. I was the only one, it felt like I had to start a new generation of life, a new civilisation.
I spent hours in the mud sobbing, but that’s when he came… The creature that was in my room last years Halloween. He removed his hood, his face was all wrinkly and he had lots of pimples all over his face, instead of hair he had nails in a style like one of those boys that think they’re cool so they have one side of their head shaved and the other not. He was tall and had long fingers with no nails.
“Where’s has everything gone!” I shouted.
“Gone to another world!” I hissed “But I can’t seem to make you go!”
“Why?” I asked.
“I don’t know, but it’s your fault I need you gone!” He shouted. He pointed his hands to me and a black aura wrapped around me, but nothing happened. The creature screamed, “WHY!!!” The black aura disappeared and I fell into the mud. I quickly ran away and hid in this old shed that had seemed not to have disappeared. Thoughts went through my head faster than ever that I couldn’t think straight. What was I going to do? What was going to happen? Was I going to survive? Or was I going to disappear like everyone and everything else?
I hope you liked it!
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Do you have anything ideas on what I could improve in my writing?
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