Hello Readers, for this Summer Learning Journey I had to make a short poem about me on the moon. I hope you like it!
Have you made a poem about being on the moon before?
Is there anything I can improve?
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Loved it! And you know what - if people could see earth from space, I think they'd realise what a beautiful planet we lived on that they would want to really look after her. Your poem helped me to imagine that! Well done!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Gaia,
ReplyDeleteAnother incredible blog post. You’ve really nailed the eye catching designs! I particularly like the rainbow background and the spectacular picture of the moon you have designed. I like how you included the flag as well, that’s a very nice touch.
I absolutely love poems that rhyme and you have done an incredible job with this. I like the rhythm you have going and how even though you would be so far from home, you still think about it. Have you seen the pictures astronauts have taken from space of Earth It looks incredible, especially at night. Between the cool cloud formations and the bright lights it’s incredible. Did you know you can see the Great Wall of China from space? What other things do you think you’d be able to see from so high up?
Happy blogging,
Shannon