Simile and Metaphor activity - Frozen Adventures

Frozen Adventure

We were on the water for hours and I was starting to get seasick. The boat was rocking back and forth like a rocking chair. Then finally we got there. There was no way onto the ice island. The only way was to climb. It was like I was getting vertigo all over again as the boat rocked.

As we pulled up we saw heaps of polar bears all gathered together. They were giant white fluffy cats roaming around waiting for pray. The polar bears look very elegant as their silky fur glistened in the sunshine.

We looked up at the ice island. There were already ropes out for us to use. I grabbed a rope, tied myself to it and started to climb. My hands were getting saw like I was getting a carpet burn. The air was cold it sent a shiver down my spine. When I got to the top I was exhausted, so I lay there on the cold ice for a bit.

I stood up. I looked around. It was a beautiful view. Coming off the ice was waterfalls, probably over a thousand. The waterfalls were straight hydro slides. We wanted to go down them, but it would be dangerous. I felt the cool breeze on my face. The ice was diamonds glistening in the sun. It was shining so bright that I thought it would make me blind.

It was time to go now. I tied myself onto the rope again and went down. I was tired. So when I got on the boat I had a rest while we went back home.

The End: By Gaia.

Dialouge

Hi readers, This is the dialouge that I have been doing at literacy. We were learning how to do but dialouge into our writing properly. We had to do a story we had to write about. The story is about going on a trip. My trip is going to Fiji. 

Enjoy it!

Part 1

“Hey, Sophie have you got all your gear to go to Fiji?” Piper asked.
“Yes! I have everything!” Sophie replied.
“Are you sure? Last time we went on holiday you forgot your pajamas.” Piper said concerned.
“Ok, I’ll check.” Sophie rummaged around in her bag.
“Oops! I forgot my pajamas!” Piper laughed, “Typical Sophie!” Sophie started to laugh too.

Part 2

“Sophie hurry up!” Piper yelled.
“I’m coming, I’m coming!” Sophie shouted as she ran with her suitcase getting dragged behind her.
“Ouch!” Piper fell over and her things in her suitcase went everywhere.
“Oh no! My suitcase! Sophie quickly help me!” Sophie quickly ran over and helped her pack up her things. After they packed up they quickly ran to the door.
“I wonder what the time is?” Sophie asked.
“Oh yeah! We might be early!” Piper replied. She looked down at her watch and saw that the time was 12:00, and they were meant to go at 1:00. They had plenty of time!
“Sophie you have enough time to see if you have everything!” Piper said. So Sophie looked in her bag and saw that she had forgotten her pants.
“Typical Sophie!”