My Parody Poem

Hey Grapesters, at literacy we had to make a parody of William Carlos Williams' poem This is Just to Say. It is a poem about him taking someone's plums and him asking for forgiveness. So here is his poem.

I have eaten
the plums
that were in the
icebox

and which
you were
probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were
delicious
so sweet
and so cold

That was William Carlos Williams' poem now here is my parody of his poem.

I have taken

The chocolate bar

That was in

The fridge

And which

You were

Probably

Saving it

For after work

Forgive me mother

It was

Devine

So tasty

And so warm as it melted in my mouth

That's mine!

What would you do? Is there anything you would change?

That's it bye!