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Monday, April 1, 2019
📜Writing Plan📜
Hello readers, this is my writing plan. In writing, we will be planing a narrative to write. So this is my plan. I made it on google drawings. Comment if you like the story I'm going to write or comment about how I could improve it. I hope you like it.

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Great ideas Gaia! A really controlled idea that should get filled in with great detail about your protagonist's experiences. I feel like you've included some of your rising action in the 'Resolution' section of your plan. To me, the attack from the stranger towards the end is your climax, where your protagonist has her skills finally tested.
ReplyDeleteWhen you get a chance do you want to try correcting this, so you can more clearly see how the action needs to build up to this point. Then you will notice as you get to writing your resolution and conclusion that we might just need a little more detail around how your character feels at the end.
Again, lovely idea Gaia :)