In Roberts writing we are doing 10 minute challenges here is one of mine:
At my home galaxy, Noroba, there was a colosus battle happening. Lots of different species of aliens were making a big disturbance. They were coming into our territory. My dad [the king] got all the technology people to fix up the Noroba bots. The aliens of Cobrin were coming from quite a far distant galaxy. I was fighting a metallic and dense robot from the galaxy Robia. He tried to shot me but I ducked and chopped his head off with my golden enchanted sword. “Norobians run back inside!” My dad shouted to our kind. We ran into the palce, meanwhile my dad got the tech people to turn the force field on. We might be lucky they might all fly away and give up! But nope that didn’t happen they all ganged up on us and tried to get through the force field. But the force field is indistructable. They will never get through!
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Tuesday, June 12, 2018
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Ooh, love it Gaia. I would have liked to read more - there's a story there waiting to happen! Mum x
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